by evidence of (1) the range of items carried, (2)
the volume of supplies issued, and (3) the size of
the inventory. This is also a good example of the
use of comparison (Navy supply system catalog
compared to a commercial mail-order catalog) to
help the reader visualize the facts offered.
Emphasis is heightened in paragraph three by the
contrast presented in parallel structures. The final
paragraph sums up the information presented in
the preceding paragraphs and states the con-
clusion drawn from the evidence.
Time-honored rules of rhetoric have estab-
lished that for emphasis, an item should stand first
or last. This has been regarded as true whether
one is speaking of the sentence, the paragraph,
or the piece of writing as a whole. When we think
of ORDER FOR EMPHASIS, we have this
principle in mind. Whether the items placed first
and last are remembered longer is open to some
question, but either position certainly gives them
emphasis at the moment. Which of the two posi-
tions offers the greater emphasis depends upon
the individual situation. The important thing for
the writer to remember is that position is a device
for gaining emphasis.
STANDARD NAVAL LETTERS
Information regarding the format, typing, and
mailing procedures for the standard naval letter,
joint letter, multiple-address letter, speedletter,
and memoranda can be found in the Department
of the Navy Correspondence Manual, SEC-
NAVINST 5216.5C, and chapter 5 of RP 3 &2,
module 3, Administration, N A V E D T R A
287-03-45-83.
PASTORAL CORRESPONDENCE
Pastoral correspondence stems from the
chaplains pastoral relationship with personnel of
the command, their dependents, or civilians.
These letters may be regarded as a written exten-
sion of the oral communication that takes place
between a minister, priest, or rabbi and those who
seek to worship. Such correspondence is addressed
frequently to naval personnel, their families,
civilian clergy, and community social agencies.
Business form is used, and the correspondence is
signed with the chaplains own name. The
signature should be followed appropriately by the
identification, Chaplain, U.S. Navy, rank, and
corps designation. Pastoral correspondence is
usually private in nature. Care should be taken
by all office personnel to safeguard this privacy.
See figure 3-4.
PROFESSIONAL CORRESPONDENCE
Professional correspondence takes place
between chaplains and relates to matters within
their Chaplain Corps. Business form may be used.
When professional correspondence is ad-
dressed to the Chief of Chaplains, the appropriate
staff chaplain normally receives a copy of the
letter. See figure 3-5.
MESSAGES
While the letter is the form of written
communication most widely used throughout the
world, the message is used more extensively within
the military organization. Communications equip-
ment can be used to electronically transmit
messages to or from virtually any location. A
naval message is used only when information is
of an urgent nature and must be transmitted
rapidly. A message should not be used if the
necessary information or directive can be sent by
some other means, such as letter mail, and still
reach its destination in time for proper action to
be taken.
General Style
Naval messages are prepared by following
communication instructions issued by the Chief
of Naval Operations. Details on the drafting of
messages,
forms used, and the handling of
messages are furnished by local communication
activities.
Message drafters must include the word
admin in the Message Handling Instructions block
of the DD Form 173. This will indicate the
administrative nature of the message. Nearly all
message traffic handled internally by the office
of the chaplain will be administrative in nature,
except perhaps for messages dealing with serious
injury or death. The main reason for the
categorizing of messages as either ADMIN or
OPERATIONAL is to channel the traffic through
the fleet broadcast so that operational traffic will
usually take precedence. As previously mentioned,
administrative traffic dealing with serious injury
or death will usually be transmitted without delay.
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